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Critique Desired- Fantasy Screenplay INT. A DARK TAVERN- NIGHT
Men and women sit around, talking quietly, drinking,
gambling, and laughing loudly. Some of the people are rather
large, hunched over scaled up tables around the edges of the
pub. The half-giants appear about ten to fifteen feet tall,
while the people in the middle are of average human height.
A FEMALE TRAVELER in a cloak sits with a MALE TRAVELER at
the bar. They order two drinks. The Male Traveler orders a
large mild drink while the Female Traveler orders a small
but heavy drink. They eye the half-giants on one side of the
pub, their faces dimly lit by flickering oil lamps.
AndromedaAmongst the darkened skies
Brightened by only starlight
Field & Sea.
Gravity is only an afterthought
Hilltops become ladders into the sky while
Inferior planets stare down upon the Earth
Jealous of such simplicity yet contemplating grandeur.
Keppler only thought of science
Linear, elliptical, movement…
Mythology had no such thoughts
Neptune & Nebulas both inhabit space
Orbiting across the lonely darkness
Probably never worried about mundane things
Questioning their existence
Right now or for all eternity such as us.
Shooting stars make us joyful while
Terminator is an otherworldly spectacle
Unknown to all those hidden in their houses
Various stars await us outside
Waiting to play like we did before
Xenagogue & inviting
Youthful but ancient curiosities.
Zenith induced euphoria continues until daylight…
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